Clan Name: Hyuuchi
Clan Bloodline:
Bloodline Information: Members of this clan are able to turn, talk, and control animals.
Clan background: Everyone in this clan has a eye that they are born with. With the eye they can talk, turn, and control and animals.This ability helps them in many types of missions. They can copy the animals exact look and even its abilities. The only known member of the clan that has this ability is a young ninja Kyro Hyuuchi. Kyro was also the protecter of his clan because of the 4 winged demon falcon inside of him. Also Kyro has some how obtained the Byakugan and the Sharingan. Not much more is known about them except they live in the leaf and mist villages. Kyro is from the mist village.

please tell me what u guys think

I'm afraid, you need to fix few things.

I mailed you what you need to fix.

ok how about this

Clan Name: Hyuuchi
Clan Bloodline:
Bloodline Information: The members of the clan obtain the Byakugan and Sharingan
Clan background: Some where over the years a mist ninja Kyro obtained the ability of the Sharingan and the Byakugan and able to activate them at the same time. He is the only known member of the clan that is known. Kyro was also the protecter of his clan because of the 4 winged demon falcon inside of him. Not much more is known about them except they live in the leaf and mist villages. Kyro is from the mist village.

ok i fixed it
Clan Name: Hyuuchi
Clan Bloodline:
Bloodline Information: Members of this clan are able to turn, talk, and control animals.
Clan background: Everyone in this clan can talk, turn, and control and animals. They have a eye that they are born with. The only known member of the clan that has this ability is a young ninja Kyro Hyuuchi. Kyro was also the protecter of his clan because of the 4 winged demon falcon inside of him. Also Kyro has some how obtained the Byakugan and the Sharingan. Not much more is known about them except they live in the leaf and mist villages. Kyro is from the mist village.

hmmmp again wrong do u want me to help u?

Your clan can't be one where you obtain the bloodlines of other clans

use your creativity and make your own bloodline
such as
Kekkei Genkai: Kin Shintai - Metal Body
Effects: The users body becomes a flexible yet indestructible metal. The user can create weapons out of this odd metal and extend his/her own limbs.
Clan: Kinikotsu(Metal Remains)
Village of Origin: Sand Village
Background: After a small child cut his arm on an odd artifact his father found in the desert he could transform his body at will into metal. This child eventually founded the Kinikotsu Clan and the artifact is now in a shrine in the northern part of the clan district along with the armor the clan founder wore during his battles in the war between the sand and leaf villages. The artifact lost its powers after the first use but it is still the pride of the clan.

And no you may not use this as yours.

you dont it is just that one person some how got it. the members of the clan only get the animal power

just wanted to clear that up